One Manila Bay evening, in 1939, there was a group of three about to have a Mother-
Father-Son fishing trip. It was the perfect day to go fishing. Isabella packed the sandwiches,
extra snacks, and some refreshments, while her husband, Michael, and their son, Timmy,
packed the fishing equipment. They were looking forward to this for months, so they were really excited. They were so excited that finished doing everything in ten minutes! It would usually
take about forty-five minutes. They locked their door and off they went. Even though they had a small boat they were having one of the best times ever, even though Timmy was only four. This
was his first fishing trip, and he was having a wonderful time! They started their fishing at
7:00pm, and by around 7:30pm, they had caught over thirty fish. Timmy caught five fish. Some
of them were salmon, trout, pike and they even caught a few rainbow trout. They had a lobster
cage, so they caught lobsters too. They caught about 200 fish in the next few hours. They
spotted a few men on land. They had a machine that looked like it made fireworks. They
watched the fireworks from the water. They ate their sandwiches for supper. Timmy had a ham
and cheese sandwich. Then they tried to paddle but the boat was stuck. Michael and Isabella
hopped out of the boat, while Timmy kept on paddling. Finally they decided to give up and
Isabella said, “Lets just spend the night here! We always bring blankets here!” “Uh, I don’t think we have any blankets in here Bella,” said Michael. She ignored him and dug through the boat
anyway and found some. “See I told you guys!” They put their blankets on the sand and went to
sleep with the boat left in the water. They woke up at 8:00am. They couldn’t believe it! All their
stuff was gone. The only things that weren’t gone were their blankets and their boat. “Where are all our stuff Mommy?!” Timmy asked in a kiddish voice. “I don’t know Timmy,” “HEY!! WHERE
ARE ALL MY FISHING RODS!? THOSE ARE EXPENSIVE YOU KNOW! Michael yelled madly.
“Daddy?” “What? Did you take them?” “No, I think we got robbed! Right Mommy?” “Yea,
maybe an evil monster came and stole all our stuff.” Timmy had a frightened look on his face.
“I’m just kidding. There is no such thing!” After she said that he felt better. “Well, we should go
look around for clues of where they went,” Michael suggested. They all looked in separate
directions. They looked for a long time. It was useless! They couldn’t find anything or anyone
around. “I guess we have to stay the day here,” Isabella said as she sighed. “Mom? Why can’t we walk to our house?” “Well, because-----” “Timmy! We can’t walk! Look how far it is!” Michael
yelled as he interrupted Isabella. “Didn’t we drive here in the first place?” “Oh, right! You’re
smart little kid!” He dug in his pocket. “Wait, where are my keys? Bella, do you have them?”
Isabella shook her head. “I’ll check the boat!” He couldn’t find them there either. He went into
the parking lot to see if their car was there. Nope! There was nothing. “They stole our car too?”
“Hey, Mom! Dad! What’s this?” He gave it to his dad to examine it. “Timmy! This is a firework,”
“Hey look! There’s a path of them! Maybe it was the people it was the people operating the
fireworks.” They followed the path and it lead to a truck. It was probably robbers' truck. Michael looked inside and he saw keys. He checked if the door was locked, and it wasn’t . He opened the
truck door and went inside. He looked through the back window you see if there was anything in
the back, and he saw all their stuff. Isabella and Timmy hopped in the truck and off they went. It was muddy where their car was, so hopefully they didn’t go far. The good thing was that they
didn’t end up going to far, and the bad thing was that there were so much people at the market.
They parked in the back, so that the robbers wouldn’t notice them. They waited for the robbers
to go to Michael and Isabella’s car. Why were they taking so long? They must of came there at
the same time they did. Michael, Isabella, and Timmy were bored and tired. They almost went
asleep, but Timmy saw them, and they were wide awake. Isabella phoned the police. While
Michael followed them. They chased after the robbers before the policemen came. The
police caught them when they came. It was the best fishing trip a little boy like Timmy
could have!
By: Nicole G.
Editors: Megan M., Tanner S., Jessica D./Haley M.
Father-Son fishing trip. It was the perfect day to go fishing. Isabella packed the sandwiches,
extra snacks, and some refreshments, while her husband, Michael, and their son, Timmy,
packed the fishing equipment. They were looking forward to this for months, so they were really excited. They were so excited that finished doing everything in ten minutes! It would usually
take about forty-five minutes. They locked their door and off they went. Even though they had a small boat they were having one of the best times ever, even though Timmy was only four. This
was his first fishing trip, and he was having a wonderful time! They started their fishing at
7:00pm, and by around 7:30pm, they had caught over thirty fish. Timmy caught five fish. Some
of them were salmon, trout, pike and they even caught a few rainbow trout. They had a lobster
cage, so they caught lobsters too. They caught about 200 fish in the next few hours. They
spotted a few men on land. They had a machine that looked like it made fireworks. They
watched the fireworks from the water. They ate their sandwiches for supper. Timmy had a ham
and cheese sandwich. Then they tried to paddle but the boat was stuck. Michael and Isabella
hopped out of the boat, while Timmy kept on paddling. Finally they decided to give up and
Isabella said, “Lets just spend the night here! We always bring blankets here!” “Uh, I don’t think we have any blankets in here Bella,” said Michael. She ignored him and dug through the boat
anyway and found some. “See I told you guys!” They put their blankets on the sand and went to
sleep with the boat left in the water. They woke up at 8:00am. They couldn’t believe it! All their
stuff was gone. The only things that weren’t gone were their blankets and their boat. “Where are all our stuff Mommy?!” Timmy asked in a kiddish voice. “I don’t know Timmy,” “HEY!! WHERE
ARE ALL MY FISHING RODS!? THOSE ARE EXPENSIVE YOU KNOW! Michael yelled madly.
“Daddy?” “What? Did you take them?” “No, I think we got robbed! Right Mommy?” “Yea,
maybe an evil monster came and stole all our stuff.” Timmy had a frightened look on his face.
“I’m just kidding. There is no such thing!” After she said that he felt better. “Well, we should go
look around for clues of where they went,” Michael suggested. They all looked in separate
directions. They looked for a long time. It was useless! They couldn’t find anything or anyone
around. “I guess we have to stay the day here,” Isabella said as she sighed. “Mom? Why can’t we walk to our house?” “Well, because-----” “Timmy! We can’t walk! Look how far it is!” Michael
yelled as he interrupted Isabella. “Didn’t we drive here in the first place?” “Oh, right! You’re
smart little kid!” He dug in his pocket. “Wait, where are my keys? Bella, do you have them?”
Isabella shook her head. “I’ll check the boat!” He couldn’t find them there either. He went into
the parking lot to see if their car was there. Nope! There was nothing. “They stole our car too?”
“Hey, Mom! Dad! What’s this?” He gave it to his dad to examine it. “Timmy! This is a firework,”
“Hey look! There’s a path of them! Maybe it was the people it was the people operating the
fireworks.” They followed the path and it lead to a truck. It was probably robbers' truck. Michael looked inside and he saw keys. He checked if the door was locked, and it wasn’t . He opened the
truck door and went inside. He looked through the back window you see if there was anything in
the back, and he saw all their stuff. Isabella and Timmy hopped in the truck and off they went. It was muddy where their car was, so hopefully they didn’t go far. The good thing was that they
didn’t end up going to far, and the bad thing was that there were so much people at the market.
They parked in the back, so that the robbers wouldn’t notice them. They waited for the robbers
to go to Michael and Isabella’s car. Why were they taking so long? They must of came there at
the same time they did. Michael, Isabella, and Timmy were bored and tired. They almost went
asleep, but Timmy saw them, and they were wide awake. Isabella phoned the police. While
Michael followed them. They chased after the robbers before the policemen came. The
police caught them when they came. It was the best fishing trip a little boy like Timmy
could have!
By: Nicole G.
Editors: Megan M., Tanner S., Jessica D./Haley M.
3 comments:
Great job on creating your blog, you added pictures, story, editors and title. :)
I like the part where they caught 200 fish and that they caught the robbers
I thnk you could improve by maybe making it a little longer next time.
Other than that great story.
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